A Gentleman's Kiss |
When I saw the authors listed in this group, I was excited to
read their latest novellas.
Let’s begin with the
summary:
Are you ready for some
good old-fashioned romance in a contemporary setting? Then you’ll enjoy these
nine stories of modern women who are forced to slow down and take a new look at
dating and romance when new men enter their lives. For some it will take vacation
time, others will discover [it] through music, while some need the gentle
nudges from both God and Grandma. Delight in discovering how chivalry is not
dead despite the stresses of today’s world.
And now, my review:
As I mentioned, I was
excited to read these authors’ latest novellas. I’ve long been a fan of Barbour
novella collections. But as soon as I received it I saw the story’s individual
copyright dates were 2003 and before. Why wasn’t this made
plain? Either way, I wanted to see if the writing was as strong as I’d expect
from these accomplished authors. I began with the first story and was soon
disappointed. There were a slew of characters to track in the opening pages and
no hook. I flipped to another one and got a little further into the story
before the writing bogged down. So, I tried a bit later in the collection. This one fizzled out.
Another felt like a repeat of the first novella, opening in almost exactly the
same way—was this a mistake for the ARC version? One of the stories was set in
Paris, and I wanted to love it, but the romance didn't progress believably. The
final one I attempted to read (there are nine in all; I didn’t attempt all of
them) was chock full of reader feeding, which makes for dull reading. All of these rookie mistakes can mostly be explained away by the timing. This was over ten years ago, after all. Writing and editing trends have changed since these novellas came out. I'm sure the writing skills of these authors has as well. As an editor I see writing at all levels. I was hoping to see high level writing here in my "leisure" reading. I choose recent and upcoming releases for that reason.
Overall, I was
disappointed in this collection. I understand re-releasing titles, hoping to
find a new life for them. I even respect that. But to not let readers know that
it’s a re-release feels like a betrayal. Even on Amazon’s page for this title, there isn’t an
easily spotted list of copyright dates for the original titles, only author
bios. I wish these authors and this publisher the best, but I'll be more cautious in the future.
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